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May 6. * * *explanatory note I do not find that the repetition of an important word a few times—say three or four times—in a paragraph, troubles my ear if clearness of meaning is best secured thereby. But tautological repetition whichapparatus note has no justifying object, but merely exposes the fact that the writer’s balance at the vocabulary bank has run short and that he is too lazy to replenish it from the thesaurus—that is another matter. It makes me feel like calling the writer to account. It makes me want to remind him that he is not treating himself and his calling with right respect; and—incidentally—that he is not treating me with proper reverence. At breakfast, this morning, aapparatus note member of the family read aloud an interesting review of a new book about Mr. Gladstone in which the reviewer used the strongapparatus note adjective “delightful”apparatus note thirteenapparatus note times. Thirteenapparatus note times in a short review, not a long one. In five of the cases the word was distinctly the right one, the exactapparatus note one, the best one ourapparatus note language can furnish, therefore it made no discord; but in theapparatus note remaining cases it was out of tune. It sharped or flatted, one or the other, every time, and was as unpleasantly noticeable as is a false note in music. I looked in the thesaurus, and under a single head I found four words which would replace with true notes the false ones utteredapparatus note by four of the misused “delightfuls;” and of course if I had hunted under related heads for an hour and made an exhaustive search I should have found right words, to a shade, wherewith to replace the remaining delinquents.

I suppose we all have our foibles. I like the exact word, and clarity of statement, and here [begin page 120] and there a touch of good grammar for picturesqueness; but that reviewer cares for only the last-mentioned of these things. His grammar is foolishly correct, offensivelyapparatus note precise. It flaunts itself in the reader’s face all along, andapparatus note struts and smirks and shows off, and isapparatus note in a dozen ways irritating and disagreeable. To be serious, I write good grammar myself, but not in that spirit, I am thankful to say. That is to say, myapparatus note grammar is of a high order, though not at the top. Nobody’s is. Perfect grammar—persistent, continuous, sustained—is the fourth dimension, so to speak: many have sought it, but none has found it. Even this reviewer, this purist, with all his godless airs, has made two or three slips. At least I think he has. I am almost sure, by witness of my ear, but cannot be positive, for I know grammar by ear only, not by note, not by the rules. A generation ago I knew the rules—knew them by heart, word for word, though not their meanings—and I still know one of them: the one which says—which says—but never mind, it will come back to me presently. This reviewer even seemsapparatus note to know (or seems even to know, or seems to know even) how to put the word “even” in the right place; and the word “only,” too. I do not like that kind of persons. I never knew one of them that came to any good. A person who is as self-righteous as that, will do other things. I know this, because I have noticed it many a time. I would never hesitate to injure that kind of a man if I could. When a man works up his grammar to that altitude, it is a sign. It shows what he will do, if he gets a chance; it shows the kind of disposition he has; I have noticed it often. I knew one once that did a lot of things. They stop at nothing.

But anyway, this grammatical coxcomb’s review is interesting, as I said before. And there is one sentence in it which tastes good in the mouth, so perfectly do the lastapparatus note five of its words report a something which we have all felt after sitting long over an absorbing book. The matter referred to is Mr. Gladstoneexplanatory note’sapparatus note boswellised conversations, andapparatus note his felicitous handling of his subjects.

One facet of the brilliant talker’s mind flashes out on us after another till we tire with interest.

That is clearly stated. We recognise that feeling. In the morning paper I find a sentence of another breed.

There had been no death beforeapparatus note the case of Cornelius Leanapparatus note which had arisen and terminated in death since the special rulesexplanatory note had been drawn up.

By the context I know what it means, but you are without that light and will be sure to get out of it a meaning which the writer of it was not intending to convey.

Revisions, Variants Adopted or Rejected, and Textual Notes [Comment on Tautology and Grammar]
  [Comment on Tautology and Grammar] ●  not in (MS) 
  which ●  not which merely which (MS) 
  a ●  the laziest a  (MS) 
  strong ●  adj strong (MS) 
  “delightful” ●  “delightfull” (MS) 
  thirteen ●  nine thirteen (MS) 
  Thirteen ●  Nine Thirteen (MS) 
  exact ●  exactly  (MS) 
  our ●  the our (MS) 
  the ●  the other the (MS) 
  uttered ●  f uttered (MS) 
  offensively ●  irritatingly offensively  (MS) 
  and ●  and tries all it can  (MS) 
  is ●  is is corrected miswriting  (MS) 
  my ●  I my (MS) 
  seems ●  kno seems (MS) 
  the last ●  the last  (MS) 
  Mr. Gladstone’s ●  the Mr. Gladstone’s  (MS) 
  and ●  their quality and (MS) 
  before ●  until before  (MS) 
  Lean ●  Lean,  (MS) 
Explanatory Notes [Comment on Tautology and Grammar]
 

May 6. * * *] A series of asterisks was Clemens’s typical signal that he had omitted some portion of text (see “Special Sorts” in the “Guide to Editorial Practice,” L6, 703–4).

 

Mr. Gladstone] The English statesman William Ewart Gladstone (1809–98) served four times as prime minister of the United Kingdom.

 

no death before the case of Cornelius Lean . . . special rules] Cornelius Lean, an employee of the London firm of Bryant and May, manufacturers of matches, died in late April 1898 of necrosis of the jaw, the result of exposure to white phosphorus. As a result of investigations into the deaths of Lean and others, the firm was found to be in violation of [begin page 500] special rules passed between 1891 and 1895 requiring that all cases of the disease be reported (Satre 1982, 8–9, 19–24).

[A Comment on Tautology and Grammar] ❉ Textual Commentary

Clemens wrote ‘small type’ in the margin next to both extracts (120.25–26, 120.29–30).